The first, assertive yet moderate and proactive in its approach; the second, sounding the alarm bells and calling “all hands aboard.”
I believe Sen. Slotkin's approach has more potential to attract others and be more effective. Thanks for laying out both.
Senator Slotkin has a couple of other major speeches on other topics she plans to give. We'll see if this one, and those, gain traction.
Succeed/secede. Succession/secession. Please proofread this one more time and fix it before more people read it.
I took your advice and sent a revised version. It may still have mistakes, but as you saw the original was peppered with them. In my haste to put the column on line, I did a poor job of proofreading. Thanks for reading
I believe Sen. Slotkin's approach has more potential to attract others and be more effective. Thanks for laying out both.
Senator Slotkin has a couple of other major speeches on other topics she plans to give. We'll see if this one, and those, gain traction.
Succeed/secede. Succession/secession. Please proofread this one more time and fix it before more people read it.
I took your advice and sent a revised version. It may still have mistakes, but as you saw the original was peppered with them. In my haste to put the column on line, I did a poor job of proofreading. Thanks for reading